Sunday, March 7, 2010

Grand Theft Poetry

Trying to find peace and mind
The tear is famous, briefly, to the cheek
Of total silence to show myself
Trying to hear what those three girls are plotting
But like a nightmare I wake to
The world beside may murmur
By drinking a glass of milk a certain way
In all that is natural and holy
Having forgotten the law of gravity
The same night whitening the same trees
On this green bank, by the soft sand
The nightmare song
Im as a cold as a toad
The crips, the bloods, the kings
But you got to try hard
Caught up inside his fist
Took one step forward
Your poem will fly away
And that has made all the difference.


2 comments:

  1. I am not quite sure what this is supposed to be about...

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  2. i wont lie i am a little confused what exactly you are trying to send across with this poem. for future poems i advise making it connect together a lil more. just flow well.

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